There are many other places in the world. Also, there are many places that are favored by people, too. Many people like amusement parks, movie theaters, and so on. However, the place that I like the most is my house.
The first reason why I like my house better than anywhere else is because it is comfortable. My house is in Seoul, and it is not big. However, I am certain that my house is more convenient than anywhere else. My room is not so clean, but it is suitable for me since I don't have to clean my room. The strange thing is that I don't have any confusion about where something is. Also, my living room looks large and clean. This is a huge advantage for me, because I like to lie down on the floor.
Second, my house is suitable for me to do my hobby, which is sleeping. I have been to many other hotels, dormitories, and motels. However, I felt that the place where I sleep should be organized by me, because only I could make myself comfortable. For example, I have left my house in December 25th, and I have also slept in GLPS for 5 days. Although I have slept in here for less than a week, I find difficulty in sleeping.
Like this, I thank my parents for my house. At first I thought that a big house is good to live. However, as I have grown to be a teenager, I found out that nowhere was more comfortable that my house. I wish that I could have a house like this even when I grow up, too/
Taewoo,
답글삭제In general, I thought your essay was fine. I wish that you had taken time out to fully describe your house. Perhaps what would have been helpful was to describe a particular aspect of your house, like your bedroom. How does it look like? What can be found inside? This would have effectively depicted why your house is your favourite place. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Happy new year and see you in class!